Redskin Persuasive Writing

Mr Billings asked us to write a persuasive about why we deserve redskins. He promised that the best persuasives got some! I know that he is only doing this so we try do one of our best pieces of writing but still, I want redskins! Here is my work.

Introduction

Redskins are yummy treats. We all love redskins. But Mr Billings is eating them all himself! I want redskins! But I only get fed brussel sprouts at home so the only treats I get are at school. Now I have the opportunity to get some redskins. So I am going to do the best persuasive story ever to get Mr B to give me some. Everyone should love redskins. These are some reasons why I should be allowed some.

Point 1

Redskins are sugary treats that everybody enjoys. But if you have never tried one then you’re missing out. Redskins are as yummy as… redskins? See? They are so tasty I am saying they are as tasty as redskins. Which is true because they are redskins… and they are as tasty as redskins. I want redskins! I haven’t had redskins in a whole term! ( If you call how long it has been since the end of term one a whole term ) Also, when I bought five redskins in the auction I gave three away! And then I gave the other one to my brother. So I bought five redskins and only got one. I miss the sweet taste of redskins!

Point 2

If I don’t get a redskin within next week then I will die! You wouldn’t want that, would you? I’m sure that other people are exaggerating like I am, but I have lots to give! In fact, you are bribing me to write this. So it is quite unfair if I exaggerate and I don’t get redskins. But I swear on my life ( literally on my life, because if I don’t get one in within next week then I will loose my life… ) that I will die if I don’t get one.

Point 3

If my last two points didn’t persuade you then I guess I will have to beg you… PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CAN I HAVE SOME REDSKINS? I am starving because I don’t eat the brussel sprouts my parents give me. Who would want to eat brussel sprouts anyway, I mean seriously, eat brussel sprouts? Gross. I really would appreciate it if you decided to give me some redskins. Seriously.

Summary / Conclusion

If my points didn’t persuade you then I guess I’m out of luck… At least I tried. Those were the the reasons I want a redskins. I’m actually serious about the death thing… Seriously. I would really like it if you gave me some redskins. Thanks for reading my persuasive which may or may not have persuaded you to give me redskins. Seriously. Thanks. But I am actually really serious about the death thing. So please consider the redskins.

( I am not actually serious about the death thing… But please can I have a redskin or two... or three… or a whole packet of them! )